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NEW SET
A
Indicate whether each sentence below:
(A) contains an error in diction (word use)
(B) is wordy or contains unjustifiable repetition of ideas
(C) contains a mixed metaphor or cliche
(D) contains an error is grammar or sentence structure
(E) is correct (contains no error)
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1. The painting of the street in Paris is really more unique than any
other illustration in the book.
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a
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2
Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
2
(A) Since "unique" is an absolute, it cannot be modified by "more."
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2. Actually seeing that the reservoir was only 40 percent full which was
a great shock made me realize the severity of the water shortage.
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d
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(D) Commas are needed to set off the clause "which was a great shock."
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3. You are liable to be deceived by her beauty.
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(A) The correct word is not "liable" but "likely."
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4. He promised to report back to us after he did the initial research.
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b
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(B) The sentence is wordy since "back" is a redundant element in the
phrase "report back."
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5. To read a poem with understanding, each line should be analyzed.
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(D) It is clearer to say: "If you wish to read a poem with understanding,
you should analyze each line."
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6. He hadn't ought to object to the use of a typewriter, especially since
he knows how important legibility is.
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(A) "Hadn't ought" should be replaced by "should not" or "ought not to."
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7. Straddling the fence, the sunset appeared more glorious and more
breathtaking than ever before.
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(D) The sentence needs to be rephrased so it does not sound like the sunset
is straddling the fence.
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8. Many joggers prefer to run early in the morning; many prefer to run
early in the evening.
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B
Correct.
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B
(E) This sentence is correct.
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NEW SET
B
Indicate whether each sentence below:
(A) contains an error in diction (word use)
(B) is wordy or contains unjustifiable repetition of ideas
(C) contains a mixed metaphor or cliche
(D) contains an error is grammar or sentence structure
(E) is correct (contains no error)
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9. When she heard of the death of her dog, tears arrived in her eyes,
and she began to weep.
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
2
(A) The verb "arrived" is inappropriate.
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10. He is only a young boy, although he appears to be older because of his
mature outlook and his ability to work like a Trojan.
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(C) The phrase "to work like a Trojan" is a cliche.
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11. We were told to speak clearly and loudly, and that audibility was
also necessary.
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b
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(B) The sentence is wordy since speaking "loudly" would assure
"audibility."
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12. He should bring the book to the library since it is already overdue.
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(A) The correct word is "take," not "bring."
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13. The brief volume of verse was carefully taken off of the shelf and
secreted in the closet.
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b
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(B) The sentence is wordy since the correct phrase is "taken off," not
"taken off of."
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14. I enjoy reading poetry. I do not enjoy reading essays.
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Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
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(E) These sentences are correct.
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15. Changing of the rules is not allowed or permitted, especially in our
organization.
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C
Correct.
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wrong answer explanation
C
(B) The sentence is wordy since "allowed or permitted" is repetitious.
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